Timsplosion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Energy Drink]

Like Eddworld with ADHD...

I thought it was very well animated, drawn, and voiced, although I did feel it was a little short. Like maybe we should've seen when the guy who was drugged woke up, and the other guy was doing something, like, I dunno, drawing on his face, or using him as part of a puppet ballet or something.
But still, nice work.

[Independent Life]

Wow.

This is really good. I gotta say, I wasn't expecting it to be in Russian (probably shoulda read the Author Comments first :P), but it's still a good flash. And I agree with MadAsHell, it does remind me of Edd. (Go on series and see "Edd's World", I think it's called)
But yeh, good job, and I'm looking forward to more of these.

brysew responds:

Thanks! I think Edd looks like Derek, but my style is other :-)

[Bueno Nacho Ad]

Not bad. :)

The animation and movement of characters was of a fair quality, the music fitted well, and the backgrounds were very well drawn, but there's definitely room for improvement.
Biggest improvement needed is definitely a preloader. You can download them from Newgrounds, look just above the Audio Portal/Games buttons. Other than that, you could also use a bit of improvement on lip syncing, and the writing at the end could use a bit of formatting, adjusting the layout and size, just to make it look better.
But yeh, nice work here. Keep animating. :)

whooping-crane responds:

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.
About the preloader: since I made this to play in the hallway TVs at my school my teacher did not want a play button because it had to play automatically. I uploaded it anyway without any buttons but I'll probably find some time at school to change it and then upload it again.

[Flash vs Flash]

Not bad.

I'm guessing you're relatively new to flash, and recently watched Animator vs Animation, but still, fair animation for a beginner. Keep practising, and it's probably a good idea to move away from sticks, and you'll get better, no doubt. I think you should probably smooth out the lines a bit, perhaps use a thinner brush, and it would look better.

Keep animating.

poninja responds:

thank you

[The Tempest in 60 seconds]

Nice.

Good animation. I gotta say, it's probably better than my own version, which I only managed to get down to 94 seconds, rather than the 60 you got it to. Although the starting 4 or 5 seconds seemed awfully similar. But that's probably because it's the same play.

Anyways, good voice acting, good animation, good style, and just a good summary of the play overall.

Lazyfeet responds:

Ha, I actually re watched yours straight after I submitted this. Aw, yours is the original man. I love it. Even though you did cheat without having Alonso's story >:)

Ty for the review. *Watches your others*

[Pokemon Hunter]

Wow.

That was really awesome. I think there's a Weekly Award in the pipeline here. Seriously, why hasn't Nintendo hired you yet?
But give us a lil more time to read descriptions. That's my only criticism.

NCH responds:

right click play dude ;)

[2nd Annual Tank Awards]

Cool.

Well done to everyone who won, you can't say they didn't deserve it.
And Tom, nice, funny presentation. Tell you what you should do next year.

You should do what you did this year, except it's real, live, awards ceremony with the nominees there if they can be there, and NG staff presenting the awards along side you, and awesome stuff like that. Then you just video that, edit it as quick as possible, and post it up here. That would be completely awesome in almost every imaginable way. Just an idea though.

[The Sketch Collab '08]

You finished it?

Wow, I thought this collab failed! Well, well done on submitting it. I thought that dumassstudios had lost my part and my preloader, so seeing this was a bit surprising. Next question is, will there be a Sketch Collab 09?

fredstermaster responds:

Lol, it's hard to believe I know X)
I'm not sure about a skecth collab 09, but I think I'll pass on leading it. I can't go through all that again XP